Noticed there are a few people on here interested in poetry and writing so thought I'd give it a go, this is just a first draft so be gentle.......


Whisper


love (amongst other things) expressed in zeros and ones?
11000010001I
God, she is beautiful
never seen a more beautiful collection of pixels
and where does it all go?
this stuff we pour into the screen
into the ether, from the heart
and nether regions
binary to satellite and back again
stored, we know not where, forever
digital remnants of moments shared
orgasms (little deaths) immortalised
there is lust in the wires tonight
and an eternity from now
space junk will carry my yearning
zeros and ones around a dying star
she will still be beautiful


a holiday camp romance I recall
(she let me kiss her on the waltzer, dizzy before it even began)
she’s making me feel that way again
here, you can be whoever you want to be
so why can’t I help being myself?
just tell her, ask her…


(whisper) I love you
(whisper) I want you
(whisper) ……
it never comes

What a gift from gift!!!!!!
<<and where does it all go?
this stuff we pour into the screen
into the ether, from the heart
and nether regions
binary to satellite and back again
stored, we know not where, forever
digital remnants of moments shared>>
I love this!!!!!
Thank you so much for sharing!!! We want more!!

she let you kiss her on the waltzer? dirty cow! LOL

my waltzer has never been kissed...... :)


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A passion for destruction is also a CREATIVE passion!

totaly at a lost, just way to technical for me........................... no rime no reason but tis good ty m8 :)


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I think that once in everyones life they find that one person who means the most to them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

saxon a écrit:

totaly at a lost, just way to technical for me........................... no rime no reason but tis good ty m8

Ha! yeah, it was a bit of an experiment in just blurting it all out onto the page with no self censoring....... it is pretty awful.... you win some you lose some eh?

keyser, kissing on the waltzers is flippin amazing!

gift , is good m8 really, i have never been into writing myself and it shows if you ask a few . What you have put down is just diffrent does not make it bad :) as i said i did enjoy it . keep it up m8 and again ty .


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I think that once in everyones life they find that one person who means the most to them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

[quote]keyser, kissing on the waltzers is flippin amazing! [/quote]

yeah yeah til the candy floss comes back eeewwww :D

Don't knock it 'til you've tried it stu!

The kissing I mean, not the candy floss vomitting....... unless that's your thing, hee hee!

right then who's gonna be first to google "candy floss vomitting"